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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ALChemy 7-Apr-06/5:37 PM
Most believers agree that God is something that exists beyond our comprehension. Are you to say that nothing exists beyond our comprehension. You may have a diffrent word for it, you may choose not to attach symbolism but I'm sure you haven't ruled out the possibility of such a thing as the incomprehensible.
Could there not be something greater that our universe exists in that we haven't found yet? Maybe there are beings that govern that greater than the universe place and maybe they like to be called God by the little people in the universes the beings have created.




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