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Monday Morning (Free verse) by Sunny

Sky of nights cast iron heat- the hot breath and the cauldrons. I lie staked to her claim. The Evening has me under her skirt and a rope 'round the ankles. I breathe in my exhale… wearisome I vent my own black mouth. Teardrops hiss at the gravel; the crazed torrent flattens. The metallic sky that hangs over my brow is my ceiling-the great light bandit. My eyes hibernate in their deep dark pots, and I want white linens to cocoon me up. With morning comes a shine and a turning of lights into my window, a child that is spiraling. The sky’s smog lies inside our dumpsters from last nights regret. Sky burns blue, canvas is ready.

Ranger 6-Apr-06/8:39 AM
Great stuff, but I'd prefer this in more complete phrases - i.e. without the breaking up of sentences.
'The great light bandit' is a super line.




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