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Time Will Change (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

Time will change like the leaves on a tree Love will come and go But you will soon be set free Life will go on like a slow ticking clock Your heart will take a different beat But life won't be the same until you knock You will hear someone answer with a mighty voice God will come into your heart to live forever But in the end it's God's choice

Garrett S Sexton 27-Mar-06/7:53 AM
If you cannot take criticism don't put it out there man!I find it laughable you worked hard on this small piece,are you 9?
I have no opinion of you I do not know you I just judged your work honestly.Sorry we don't agree,thats life!After all who am I to say?You won lots of contests with this work.
AGAIN WITH THE GOD BIT TRYING TO SCARE ME NOW, HOW AMERICAN!
I AM FAR TO MATURE OF MIND TO GIVE THIS ANY CREDENCE.
THEWORK IS LAME,NO RUDENESS INTENDED.




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