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Revised Dream (Final Version) (Free verse) by Wakeboarder20

Facing the unknown without fear, without knowledge or compromise. With the world by my side full of faith and confidence. Staring at the sun and never going blind. It’s been beat to a pulp scared up and overlooked. But I’ve always seen it as a sturdy rock to stand. See me as a fool but I'll always believe. Another day’s gone by. One more forgotten dream but this one's never lost. Take it to heart or ignore it but know in every way that this is a dream for all.

Scarlett 24-Mar-06/2:07 PM
What pulls me into this poem is the repetition ~ it does sound prayer-like. I agree with Ranger that a positive based poem is refreshing.




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