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Settling in (Other) by INTRANSIT

Winter is sliding in, I can hear it in the way the garage door squeals against it's track. The washer and dryer fight like brother and sister, my front door asks: "Whoooo are you?" The ceiling fan hums, whirrs and tinks a sconce. Turning the heat up, the motor shudders to a start; ducts bwong in approval. Still, there's one room that hoards the blankets and re- fuses to warm up. I make my way towards the bathroom as the floor groans adoringly, and the plumbing sings its' vibrato welcome as the tub fills slowly. I sink in and listen to the house pulling the siding tight.

INTRANSIT 19-Mar-06/5:16 PM
I cut a few more ifs ands and buts out. closed the tercets and shifted the vibrato line around. Why tercets? Because I'm still grappling with the best use of line breaks thing. Now , where did I put my fender skirt.




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