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Numbers In Heaven (Free verse) by Dovina

My name is 183, one of myriad, born in heaven, nestled eternally between two evens, and called, with affection, odd. Some of us are prime, numbers so perfect they were flung to distant worlds, if maybe there, their beauty too might be beheld. I take delight in knowing I am certain, fixed and real, never to be forsaken or replaced, unique, useful, unmatched and unmatchable. Pregnant with potential in Platonic minds, we odds alone, save the chosen 2, titillate their senses. Sometimes in anxious moments, Senses failing, in the wonder of it all, I feel an urgent sadness, imagine myself a figment of their god-like minds, a bipolar disturbance, perhaps a mere conveyance, no more than an assertion, a useful word. Then I feel contrived by them for pleasure and convenience, lovely only in their minds. But as the notion passes, I rest in heavenly peace, unequaled and real, fixed and founded, uniquely placed by God.

ALChemy 19-Mar-06/11:34 AM
By simply seeing what love does for other people you could conclude that love is a glorious thing. You might also descide it's a horrible thing. Even alot of people who have been in love think it's a horrible thing. If you're saying that love by the chemical definition or other scientifically provable ways exists then yes you can say it definitely exists but that can be shown to you without you having to be the one in love. If you say I know for sure that love exists because I've felt it, it's not defining love and so it is not proof(except maybe to the one feeling it). Just like saying I know for sure God exists because I feel God's presence doesn't prove that God exists(except maybe to the one feeling it). Are you seeing the connection I'm trying to make now.

Having God in your life can make the world more lovely.




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