Ranger19 Mar 2006

Ugh, I don't like this kid, but I do like the poem. Particularly the spice in the sunset, very vividly done.
A couple of suggestions - there are a few typos in here, 'viciousness', 'was' (line 15), 'neighbo(u)r's'. Also, I would have added one more violent-themed activity just to complete the distasteful character.
I love 'Today there was no change...I was just supposed to be evil'.