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Settling in (Other) by INTRANSIT

Winter is sliding in, I can hear it in the way the garage door squeals against it's track. The washer and dryer fight like brother and sister, my front door asks: "Whoooo are you?" The ceiling fan hums, whirrs and tinks a sconce. Turning the heat up, the motor shudders to a start; ducts bwong in approval. Still, there's one room that hoards the blankets and re- fuses to warm up. I make my way towards the bathroom as the floor groans adoringly, and the plumbing sings its' vibrato welcome as the tub fills slowly. I sink in and listen to the house pulling the siding tight.

Dark Angle 15-Mar-06/1:30 AM
ecargo's got it! and i like the personification of the objects in your poem, which made me think of that song... i also had a run in with the song at the local karoke bar the other night, an old homeless lady kept going up and singing songs like that one, strangest experience in a few days, but i like in la/oc so i should be witnessing a stranger one any moment.




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