ALChemy13 Mar 2006

183 is junk too. You stated 183 could be an odd number for all that it matters. So how can you expect us to think it's unique? Oh let's see, maybe 183 is just a name lik Bob. Well then why is Bob nestled between 2 evens? Of course the number 183 is nestled between 2 evens and presumably will be eternally. That's the statement you made in your poem and let's admit it's quite an obvious statement. So you didn't need to tell us that, hence it's junk. I actually thought 183 was a star at first. That metaphor would have worked great but then 183 wouldn't be eternal. Maybe you should take some advice from faithmairee and write a little more about what you know. I still think it's a great idea but I think you took the metaphor a little too far.