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Boundaries (Free verse) by Dhanesh M Kumar

The four walls fortifying the realms make it to yell beyond the walls, The fetters that build it to quell the fondle triggers a wobbly, Staggering changeling. This child edifies the nature’s statue that which bonds till the pyre, an incredible Crinkle deep in the roots, an infamous urge to Crackle the chains. A passionate bird that migrate miles; A jubilant dolphin that divulge to ether; A giraffe’s head that jettisons out; All of these are Mother’s credentials.

Ranger 13-Mar-06/8:15 AM
Makes more sense now, although I still stick by what I said about the grammar. 'Crackle the chains' is certainly clearer with the interpretation, as is 'Staggering changeling'.

Decent theme.




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