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I’m unsaid and dead (Other) by Prince of Void

I’m unsaid and dead How could it happen? No word can express No world can understand How did I drop tears upon the last hope? How less I effort to put the pain away? How bitter I’ve ended up in the dead end Since the thing’s became absurd Now I m absurd as well Age of hopeless end’s approaching me How and where and who can answer The numberless questions will fall at the end of me They can’t say how and why All worlds are absurd By the moment dies in my emptiness The kind of emptiness deserts all-end...all ends

Dovina 10-Mar-06/3:36 PM
How uplifting this is! You cannot imagine how words like "I drop tears upon the last hope," tears of joy upon realizing hope's fulfillment. And "How less I effort to put the pain away," just shows the pain-relieving medicine of a happy soul. Yes, "All words are absurd" in such happiness.




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