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Read me (Free verse) by mystic enoch

I have nobody to share my thoughts my dreams with. I have nobody in my life to say you're doing ok. I wander about in my life not knowing what to do. afraid to trust. I've been hurt so much This is my only form of expression. My poetry which..... I try to share. My poetry is my way of saying "I'm here!" "This is me." "This is what I have to say." "Read me."

Dental Panic 9-Mar-06/6:30 PM
I disagree with Ranger. I think this is very strong, crude and pure. Just cut the part where you start about poetry.
I read you. You got me.

Who soothes my thumpin', bumpin' brain?
Nobody




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