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~PROM MEANS 2 ME~ (Sestina) by T. Jonathron Remp

P eoeple having fun R eally stupid girls acting dumb O nly pouplar people allowed M om says i'm handsum S lap me in the face when i ask you to go with me U need help if ur going K icking me in the groin would feel nicer C ute chix avoiding me S nake bite is my excuse for not goin

terbenaw 9-Mar-06/2:59 AM
No offense man, but... all the Latin aside, this is not a sestina by POETIC STANDARDS. I care not of the root origins of the word, nor of what led you to believe that this is actually a sestina. The fact of the matter is: This is an Acroustic, not a Sestina. I did not base my definition off of kaolin fire's description of a sestina. Look it up ANYWHERE outside of your mind, and you will find that I am correct. If you find a site that disagrees, post it for us all to see. I'm sure we all would like to know what a sestina really is...




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