Ranger7 Mar 2006

Cool, I've had a while to think about these suggestions and decisions are starting to follow.
'Burden lifted' sounds better, I shall change that.
'Setting diamond in the band' I also like (I need to keep diamond singular though, there's only one Venus in the sky!)
'It cries, mourning' is really good, although I might play about with it a bit for effect. I'll resubmit this in the near future, I think.
Thanks for your ideas!