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A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky (Free verse) by Ranger
Unlike most who gaze at stars
He stared not through rosehip mist
But instead spent one night
Standing
Atlas, dreaming of a burden lifting
Telescope raised in a silent toast
Like a beacon lit, lens aflame
Such wide-eyed squint as Venus passed
In prism, caught within its round glass eye
He hoped to take that thin gold ring
Through which he now looks
Placing diamond in the band
With ruby glitter on its right
But his hand fell before they joined
As Venus left - a hammer's arc
Could the mist, a flowing turn of white
Seem by dawn to him avail?
Kneeling, no
A cockerel early risen, tense
Brings the news that night has gone
And once again
It cries
An astronomer will die at dawn
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