LilMsLadyPoet1 Mar 2006

I am working my way down (newest to oldest) the list of your stuff on here...in case that isn't obvious by now.
This isn't one of my favorites, thus far. It just isn't my cup of tea, perhaps. It just doesn't stand out like the others.
It IS a bit of fun...and the humour is funny in a Robinhood/'men in tights' kind of way. I don't understand why you talk of jet planes at the onset, but then stay within typical fairie tale format after that, never mentioning a tie to that plane again.
Perhaps say "The fairies joined in like biting gnats, to cast/buzz their spells about my head." ?... something to give a distinct entry and personality to them. (As they are they just look thrown in there, and seem incomplete and insignificant.)
(castles, dwarves, and all) or (castle's dwarves and all?)
>my stallion and I (If it was intentional it is just not cute enough to work here. Maybe "me and my stallion" would put a childish spin on it without making us roll our eyes...?)