Dovina1 Mar 2006

The title is very appealing, but the delivery? - well. He is apparently like Atlas, has his own telescope, but unlike telescopes, his is not a receiver of light, but a beacon lit. "Thin gold ring"? - brass maybe. Cocerels are young male chickens, which do not crow like the roosters they become.

Still, the astronomer dying at dawn is a good image, which perhaps you can build upon.