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Flower of Life (Free verse) by longships

You were a flower in bloom Brightly coloured in generosity and honesty. Surrounded by a large circle of family and friends Always smiling and laughing Eager to help Your home a place of refuge. You held the calmness of a still ocean And the warmth of a summer breeze Surrounding all with your kindness. A kindness rewarded with love from all that knew you Generous to a fault you gave with no thought of receipt. Yet now you shall be remembered thus As a flower forever in bloom

Ranger 1-Mar-06/9:56 AM
I'm not convinced that would work in a poem written purposefully to someone.
I quite like it as it is.




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