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Whalecrack (Other) by wlshepherd

Whalecrack and poppycock, I sprained my sock. Sleek mac wont mend my shack, Or hurt my back. Sea-gull egg, I weep and beg- Don't touch my leg. Treacle fever, from an unbeliever, Sent to bed by the snake-hipped weaver. Through greasy rain and warming pain, I start to descend the hill again.

Blue Magpie 1-Mar-06/12:27 AM
I must concur with Terbenaw, this appears to have taken 2 minutes to write and has nothing to offer the reader.




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