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isomers
(
Free verse
) by
skaskowski
lost inside a solid stone, the wall around an aqua-dome. my opinion: undeterred and my decisions: unobserved. make the same mistake twice just for the hell of it. what's a reminder without parallel scars?
Blue Magpie
1-Mar-06/12:14 AM
The first stanza is better than the 2nd, but I would really like to see some capitalisation at the beginning of the sentences.
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