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~PROM MEANS 2 ME~ (Sestina) by T. Jonathron Remp

P eoeple having fun R eally stupid girls acting dumb O nly pouplar people allowed M om says i'm handsum S lap me in the face when i ask you to go with me U need help if ur going K icking me in the groin would feel nicer C ute chix avoiding me S nake bite is my excuse for not goin

terbenaw 27-Feb-06/12:07 AM
Hmm... someone sounds pretty bitter. I'm not feeling what you're saying, but you do get your point across OK. This sounds like something that can be used in some sort of song. Also, this is not a sestina.




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