poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Spruce Bruce the Barnacle Goose Learns About Moulting by Blue Magpie.

Ranger25 Feb 2006

Yes, amusing in its own way. Stanza 4 line 2 doesn't make sense - I think you want to change it to something like 'Do you want folk to think you're a dunce?' There are a couple of other typos in here, but I'd be pretty pedantic to go through listing them.
Enjoyable.