poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Tulips and Roses by Mona Lisa.

Scarlett21 Feb 2006

The beginning is lovely, makes me feel that this is a muse to you. An untouchable image of passion and the dream the desires to bloom in what "could have been." There is a break though, when the dream begins. This doesn't flow together as smoothly. Don't give up on this one!