poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Russian Roulette by <~>.

<~>9 Sep 2002

you always repell me p&k, but isn't that your self-proclaimed M.O.? 'just the blood' is the dual thing again, (the mess, the familial ties), and also because, dammit, it need the word 'just' to justify the structure--1st and last lines ea stanza are their own entities as well, and without 'just' it don't werk that way. yes, the hole is exaggerated in size. you got me. the act is big, so the hole has mirrored it. and in the kitchen, bastion of domesticity...