poetandknowit9 Sep 2002

Not to be REPELLANT, but what kind of gun was this - could see kitchen through hole, but I guess the RR is referring to other things and not the actual act of the game, which is played with a revoler and most likely wouldn't make that kind of hole...well. I kind of like the idea of someone playing RR knowing the whole time they are going to play to lose. I don't know, you are describing an act from you view of a story from someone else and I kind of want to know the five knocks that pushed him to it. But that is another poem I guess. I also think the "mess" gives a clear image and "just the blood" goes overboard, but I suppose you are shooting for the double purpose, I am just not sure I like it.