richa15 Feb 2006
Oh, I didn't realise you were just putting opposites next to eachother without though of the dire and terrible consequence of such an action. I thought you were attempting to write a poem that made sense.
The bubbling which is often associated with heating-up but was actually caused by the swell of a river or a plunge pool or something which was cold is a smart metaphor. But how the hell is the ocean cold and boiling. :(