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change (3rd draft) (Haiku) by Adriaan

Hermit sits: same place, but new view. Red leaves fall.

Adriaan 15-Feb-06/1:06 AM
Thanks for your comment... it was meant to be 3-5-3 haiku. There is a debate in the haiku world about 5-7-5 (true to the sylabic count of Japanses haiku) vs. 3-5-3 (supposedly truer to the informational content of Japanese haiku). I thought I'd try the more restrictive form. Please comment on the change - I added an adjective :)




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