Glasseyez14 Feb 2006

Yea I meant four of the seven seas, but i thought that would sound too drawn out, I actually have heard that before, maybe i will just pick up a poetry for dummies book something informative just so I can know the proper way to write a decent poem, with the grammer and all. I appreciate your constructive criticm, thinking of ways to use it without ruining the poems altogether. I am still on the level where i just write what sounds good to me and makes sense. I need to work on using metaphors better and more often. I wrote this listening to johnny cash so I guess I was just thinking about his voice while working on it.