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The Virgin (Free verse) by cleverdevice

A silver toed virgin Was washing, Her body drenching, The golden apples Of her breasts, Their flesh like Yogurt. The plump cheeks of her buttocks Tossed against one another As she swung about, Flesh as lithe as water. A hand spread down To cover much swollen The fair flowing conduit, Not the whole thing But as much as she could.

Glasseyez 14-Feb-06/12:33 AM
Yea I had a ladyfriend once whos flesh was like yogurt, twas an Eskimo from canada, needless to say she came down to Florida to stay awhile and her yogurt skin curdled turning out to be a 400 lb. behimoth. God bless e-haromy.com and their misrepresented clientel. Yet to have a refund Anyhow love the poem I give it a ten because of the fond memories it brings of my made up life in Tallahassee




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