poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Flame of My Country by sylbaryn.

nentwined9 Sep 2002

I stumbled through the reading of this, both due to its (overly?) cryptic nature, and that I couldn't really find a flow in it. Especially "The book is a guide/ But the ring is music from design". And are the stars crying out for pain or from pain? or is it not the stars' pain... hmm... like I said, cryptic. And a bit confusing. :)