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time (3rd draft) (Haiku) by Adriaan

Goldfish contemplate raindrops rippling the surface Ice ends disturbance

richa 6-Feb-06/4:54 AM
Is this about how one of the dimensions of the universe is visible only to goldfish. If so I agree.




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