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A Loud Room (Free verse) by MacFrantic

The tube bursts sounds like voices and revelry of the mundane. My temples ache for pleasant dissociation, and for the cold glow. I crumble; dissipate in an overwhelming. There is sound and there is silence, and I dare not speak to disturb them both. My view from near is dots, dancing hues: a puzzle of light. Television reflections bounce and turn. Laughter pulls my posture forward to a hunch, while my eyes drown in the shadows of a midnight. I'm sure to wake to silence, And the screen does beg to see my nod complete.

Ranger 30-Jan-06/9:24 AM
Nothing to say that god'swife hasn't already, a well-written piece!




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