Ranger30 Jan 2006

Strange, I could have sworn that I'd commented on this earlier...ahh, the curse of selective memory returns! I like this, although I got the impression (from the last stanza and a half) that there's a tragedy round the corner...which turned it from a pleasent tribute to enduring feelings to having a much darker feel at the end - are you intending on following this up with a sequel?
The only line that lost me was "named Zeppelin, in his name;" - is there something going straight over my head here?
Either way, very nicely done.