poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger.

ALChemy29 Jan 2006

Better than Paul McCartney's version.

Once during one of those erie calms before the storm I stood on my porch watching a large flock of them spiraling a tunel in the grey-blue sky. Like shadows, like dark angels forming a vortex as if it were a passage to some demonic yet magnificent otherworld.