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Frozen Branches (Acrostic) by jmalone

Feathers and empty nests; realities of wintry seasons, on banks of desperate quests, still frozen for natural reasons. Trees and fallen leaves; omens of colder skies, next to longer sleeves, and truant solar rise. Branches and broken stalks; realities of arctic range, abounding treacherous walks, notwithstanding change, changed by winds of reason, harmonizing nature's season. © By jmalone

Ranger 29-Jan-06/1:32 PM
This works quite well although I'd suggest that if you're going to go for a rhyming scheme, give the poem a definite rhythm - it makes it easier to read aloud. Also, capitalise the start of every line; the beauty of acrostics is being able to instantly see what the vertical column says. Other than that, nicely done - 'truant solar rise' is a lovely line!




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