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Us Sinners (Haiku) by BrandonW

I know where you are. In heaven. I just hope that You are not alone.

ALChemy 29-Jan-06/5:27 AM
You count the syllables not the words.
In/ hea/ven. I/ just/ hope/ that/
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Zodiac won't go to heaven or hell. He'll just die, as all atheists do. You'll recognise me when you get to heaven. I'll be the one God hired to clean the bathrooms.




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