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Best left unsaid (trust first instincts edit, w/thanks) (Free verse) by ecargo

My tongue’s loose slide would soon let slip this truth, bruised blue, behind these sentinel teeth. We meet. Touch. Fuck. We seldom speak much more than surface gloss-- from niceties to wordless heat, we move. With your hand warm on my neck, I swallow words thick with promise, glistening like larva trapped in tissue webs, my palate ridged as a whale's. Words grow pallid as mushrooms in the echoless dark, slick with the sweat of caves. I want to devour you, a carnal glide, deep as a worm, down, down, in my rich earth.

zodiac 20-Jan-06/4:30 PM
You were taught free verse before rhymed/metered poetry? Really? I always thought I was taught rhymed/metered verse first because it's easier, you can talk about how a sonnet has 14 lines, iambs, trochees, all that jazz instead of sticky issues like theme or poems consisting of the word 'Poop' in the center of an unblemished piece of foolsclap.




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