Dental Panic12 Jan 2006

Where did your reply go? Anyway, it's not that I have a problem with 'she dreams' (although doing dreams in poetry I find very tricky) or 'she thinks', but with the order in which you use them here - or does she think in her dream? Sorry for not making myself clear.
Also I didn't mean to just pull out 'this is'. If you pull out a word from a good poem, the whole thing changes.