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Sunlighting (Free verse) by ALChemy

Swallows announce the end of yesterday. The morning girl awakens to their song. Her crayola sunrise paints over the gray of fading night to dawn a bright sarong, a flower-sprinkled emerald dress that stretches to the horizon’s hem and ripples in a warm wind’s caress: A playground for the cherubim. “Oh, Uncle Moon, please play with me, while the day’s still shining bright?” “I’m so tired but I’ll try Sweetpea.” And the moon missed work that night.

ALChemy 10-Jan-06/11:01 AM
Cut it out you two. I've had long discussions with both of you and I can say with a fair amount of certainty that both of you are good people who are plenty capable of caring for children and being open minded. Cyan9, I'm sure you're used to people misinterpreting your stuff as satanic or sadistic so just be patient. She's open minded enough to listen to your motive behind your poetry. Amanda, if I told you I listened to bands like "Tool" and read Clive Barker novels would you think anything less of me? I hope not. I know sometimes Cyan comes across a little harsh but he's a sensitive artist and sometimes his emotions get ahead of him. Give him a second chance to explain his motives behind his poetry.
OK I did what I could. If you two still want to fight go ahead.




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