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ReplyTo a comment on Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones.

http://mulberryfairy9 Jan 2006

I didn't get this use of "retain"
False snow on an allotment to retain, perhaps
or to retain warmth

sorry for being so traditionalist, but the "+" and the date were eyesores
it was good in spite of all that.