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portrait of powerlessness (Free verse) by digipoet

i bleed draconian sorrow toes trembling fingers forgotten my heart screams to you and at you shame, secrecy, sadism

digipoet 9-Jan-06/7:14 PM
yeah it retrospect i agree the last line is kind of pointless...i guess i thought it was needed to emphasize the others actions towards the subject but it is already clear enough. thx.




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