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Big bang before the uncertainty of a god Tears before they’ve fallen down Me before I've fallen in..... Skies before storms have come Moments before times drifted them away Memories before she made them blurred Fears before they’ve done Despairs before they’ve settled down Days before they’ve been seen Live when agony’s coming nearby you Live when emptiness empties you Live when abomination fills you Live when good or bad means by p.o.v Live when the dying light is raging against the darkness of you

Nicholas Jones 9-Jan-06/11:56 AM
Sorry, this is pretty bad, and nicking bits from Dylan Thomas generally isn't a good plan. That's why Thomas, through being a genius, held Welsh poetry back for about thirty years.




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