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Flicking (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

My thoughts stumble as I watch them lean into the apex Thrust against chicanes Bank on that complex compound that soft encouraging lip all the while keeping eyes fixed on the leader point of blind curves exit and roll on.

lmp 9-Jan-06/11:23 AM
was this ammended/edited? some of the comments don't seem to make sense...

i like this one, and after a couple of reads i get the thrill... specially liking the last 2 lines.

p.s. yeah, i know the stallone movie. cheesy in my opinion.




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