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What Matters (Haiku) by Dovina

Bright eyes flanked his chin, tender smile above his nose. I knew he loved me.

lmp 9-Jan-06/10:49 AM
i think the sentiment that inspired this work outweighs the sentiment conveyed. i am guessing a budding artist's drawing for you is the subject. as someone commented on my attempt at Haiku, "sometimes 17 syllables isn't enough".




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