poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina.

Dovina4 Jan 2006

Nor does mine. I was trying to portray the feeling of having forgotten all the connections that “paste” each new sensation to the known world. As he lost that ability, everything seems new and “unpasted.” But I agree that the last line may be over-the-top, and could be scratched.