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Construction Lot (edit) (Free verse) by zodiac

It is a dizzying sunspangled day in the city. A March-wind flirting sings in a standpipe in a lot I'm passing by where city-dwelling children used to play. Now there's a fence. And in my heart I yearn to cross that lot, and again on my return, but don’t, knowing in my heart its current kings are cold and stern. Oh, I could ask them why they've built in this, the last clear place. And they would answer Progress, such things as we learn when we are very young. And I - but I keep on my well-worn way. This wind, it flings wet trash across the lot, the city sways. And it seems if we just didn't believe these things were real before us, I could speak tongues, burn the city down, could step out and away from the ground, out into the mirror sky.

ALChemy 3-Jan-06/10:03 AM
You mean the irresponsibility that tends to come with faith?
My favorite quote from some fat comedian who's name I can't remember: "I don't care if it rains or freezes as long as I got my plastic Jesus." And how like a child you wish you could fly but as an adult you know you can't. Rodin's thinker suffering with unlimited imagination but limited ability or Don Quixote dreaming the imposible dream only time and time again falling on his ass or me as a child, holding a mirror at my waist facing up, and staring down at the mirror at the sky and pretending I'm walking on clouds. If only we could live in our dreams.

American Dream

Oh show me the land of the free,
Where one can roam endlessly,
Where topless sky meets bottomless sea
and dreams wash ashore on reality.
Oh show me that promised land.

Oh show me the land of the brave,
where nobody fears the grave,
where no one is anyone's slave
and no soul needs to be saved.
Just show me where to stand.

One of my oldest poems.

I choose to live back and forth between faith and logic.
It's a cop out I know but it actually works quite well in giving me peace of mind. I just hope you're happier with life than you sound sometimes.

I know nothing except the fact of my ignorance.-Socrates




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