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Broken Bird (Other) by Sisterwolf

Broken bird with tattered wings, what a bittersweet song she sings. Her eyes dart here, then there, as she watches for his empty stare. No longer does this lovely bird fly, she no longer wants the open sky. He took her soul and wrung it out, filling her with dread and doubt. The face she sees in the mirror is etched with sorrow, pale with fear. He taught she is ugly, unworthy, dumb. Now her feelings of worth are numb. Will she ever fly again, this battered bird, or are her wings forever tattered. She hides, never raising her pretty eyes, as every day another part of her dies.

Dovina 26-Dec-05/10:04 PM
Please don't misunderstand. I don't care about your credentials or votes on POTM at some other site or your education or even your breeding stock. Your recently posted poem "ennui" is provocative and good in my opinion. What you must realize is that the comments here may not tell you that. They could just as likely predict the return of Christ. So you can either enter that discussion or ignore it and just consider comments about your poem and the votes. It's a baby-and-bathwater kind of thing.




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