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logan st. (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation

sirens taste like lemonade mouth first, head out the window. paste of lime and splash of tread, approaching a crecendo. lights like nails through pupils fail to move my car aside. sirens taste like asphalt mixed with crystallized pimientos.

nentwined 13-Dec-05/5:14 PM
crescendo?
pimentos?

cute, but doesn't make it for me.




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