Poemranker [Replying] Thu May 02 21:12:34 PDT 2024

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I observe a mind with facets watch its anger swell and dwindle see its joy flap high, then flounder inhale a smile while passions kindle Detached and free to lend critique I watch an actor come of age capture each new scene in wonder canât wait to turn the page Through all, I do not tamper play moralist or God for that would cut my pleasure and make this poem a wad

Dovina

11-Dec-05/12:38 PM

Iâm afraid you have chosen to confuse two obviously different things. Obviously, for two reasons - because the poem does not imply your assertion - and again because I already told you this. Still, I try for patience in these matters and will address your comment. This partly due to your expressed admiration shown through a slight deviation you describe as being ashamed of me.

The serenity of which I speak results from separating myself from myself to the extent that I observe my emotions without judgment. After having done this, I find myself in position to evaluate my actions and emotions and to make corrections if needed. These are the two processes, which you have chosen to unite and call, âignore all your failings in exchange for peace of mind.â If you would like further information, I recommend, âContentment â Wisdom from around the world,â by Gillian Stokes, not alone by any means, as many of us from many perspectives have reached this conclusion.

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