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Thespian (Haiku) by BrandonW

You didn't make me. You sure as hell let me though, let me make believe. Let me make believe. There could really be something, between you and me. Between me and you. I'm glad I found out so soon, you were an actress. You were an actress. Who did not make me believe, only make believe.

cyan9 8-Dec-05/7:09 AM
Poor, Im sure Ive read work by you that is much better than this. Im sure this represents something very emotional in your life, but the simplicity and lack of elegance makes me just not want to care. It adhears rigidly to some form or another to the cost of the piece.




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